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Topic: Title: Planetarium: Dream of a Little Star: Part1
*** Sorry 4 the delay!!*^^* ***


?:How about "Planetarium"?
?:Magical light that shines forever and whenever...
?:All the stars in the sky is waiting for you...
?:..How about "Planetarium"?
?:Magical light that shines forever and whenever...
?:All the stars in the sky is waiting for you...
?:..How about "Planetarium"?
?:Congratulation!!!

A light shined through my eyes. I took out my goggles as fast as I can, before get my eyes turn into boiled eggs.
In that few seconds, I couldn't do anything.
It wasn't a whole bunch of machinguns shooting towards me, nor the poison gas that can kill you less than 5 seconds. Both of them was not the thing that made me surprised.

?: Right now, you're the 2,500,000th visitor,sir!!!

It was an unexpected, that it was a voice of a young girl.
The voice was reflected by the high cealing, so that it was hard to find where it was from.
I came back to myself,(from element of surprise)and quickly picked up my grenader.
I point the muddle of gun in front of where the voice was coming from, and free my hand from the trigger.
I thought that just scaring her will do a trick. Of course, if she was human.

Me:......

The owner of the voice gulped, and...

Girl:I'm sorry,sir. I'm really, really sorry.

She apolized as if she was really sorry.

Girl: Actually, no sir. The truth is, you're 2,497,288th visitor. I tricked you as you're 2,500,000th visitor.
Girl:..But i thought that you'll be really delighted...

I didn't understand what she was talking about.
There was a lot of questions arised on my head.
'Why there is a human in this place?', 'Who is this girl's voice?', 'Is it a trap for Waste Materials Collector?(WMC)', 'Then why am I still alive?', '..and why is this person keep talking to me...?'

Girl:To tell the truth,sir, the number that I told you isn't quite right also. Last time, a young boy and a girl came, but they told me that they didn't had admission tickets. So I let them in for free.
Girl:So, if i say exactly,sir, you are 2,497,290th visitor.
Girl:Once again, I'm terribly sorry, sir...

There was a afterimage in the dark, and there was a shadow coming towards in the otherside of a illumination.

Small size of body... seems to be a young girl.
In caution, I kept my barrel of gun pointing at her, and examined her.
Her age was 15,16 at most.
A long, brown, straight hair.
A strange ear decoration on one of her ear.
A hat that slightly covered her head, and a big ribbon on front of her chest.
A skirt that covers only a half of her thigh.
She was holding something on her chest. It doesn't look like a weapon. But from the very first, it doesn't look like something that can be use...
There is no words for it, except "Absurd".
Even a trash can will look more reasonable than that thing.

Girl:Umm...Sir?

Her endless chatter, finally came to end. She Slightly tilted her head. At that same time, a sound came out, something like when dragonfly fies.
Even there was no wind, her long hair float, as if there was no-weight-silk thread flowing around her entire body.

Just then, something suddenly came into my mind.
A girl, unarmed, standing alone in a place where no one was.
A young girl, with a smiling on her face, standing in front of a man, who is holding a grenader pointing at her...
She was........
-----------TO BE CONTINUED------------
Comment: thanx 4 reading my Planetarium: Dream of a Little Star: Part1 !!!*^^*
it took me a lot of time, thinking how is the story going to start.!!!*^^*
if u enjoyed readin this part1, plzzzzz
leave a comment!!!*^^*
Aug 21, 2008
10:24 AM

Posted by Jack K

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i want to kno who she is!
Aug 21, 2008
10:33 AM


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Good storyline but what are the characters names?
Sep 1, 2008
1:50 PM


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It's really interesting. ^_^ Please continue!
Jan 10
9:18 AM

Posted by Becky Fiala

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